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50 Word Challenge Entry

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I was running, running away from Big Boy Bob. He has been on me since I stole his ‘precious’ little Layla. She came to me and yet it is my fault!??? Anyway Bob’s beefy arm was about to clobber me when a someone took me to a dark dark tunnel…….

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  1. jnorth Avatar
    jnorth

    This has a real feel of urgency that is supported by your use of complex sentence structures. Your character seems to show little sense of responsibility and presents himself as a victim – was this intentional?

    Good ending.

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React!